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The givers pie gives data aboud the ages of population in Veren and Ital Daly during 2050 2000 and the pagection Loverall the sladictics. shows that Yengen's population was dominated by people croder 14 gears, in in 2000, whereas. Italy's residents were mostly.. middle aged people between the r of 15-59 yeaas. Population of both-the countries love expected to cige ovea by 20= Frastly from the obscave that in Vemen during 2000. graph we : half of the population were childer

The givers pie gives data aboud the ages of population in Veren and Ital Daly during 2050 2000 and the pagection Loverall the sladictics. shows that Yengen's population was dominated by people croder 14 gears, in in 2000, whereas. Italy's residents were mostly. . middle aged people between the r of 15-59 yeaas. Population of both-the countries love expected to cige ovea by 20= Frastly from the obscave that in Vemen during 2000. graph we: half of the population were childer peRrd
The given pie chart gives data about the ages of population in Yemen and Italy during 2050 2000 and the projection Loverall the sladictics. shows that Yengen's population was dominated by people croder 14 gears, in in 2000, whereas. Italy's residents were mostly. . middle aged people between the r of 15-59 yeaas. Population of both-the countries love expected to cige ovea by 20= Frastly from the obscave that in Vemen during 2000. graph we: half of the population were childer
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IELTS academic The givers pie gives data aboud the ages of population in Veren and Ital Daly during 2050 2000 and the pagection Loverall the sladictics. shows that Yengen's population was dominated by people croder 14 gears, in in 2000, whereas. Italy's residents were mostly. . middle aged people between the r of 15-59 yeaas. Population of both-the countries love expected to cige ovea by 20= Frastly from the obscave that in Vemen during 2000. graph we: half of the population were childer

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