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The given pie charts give datas in the proportion of water consumption in specific sectors that take place in six worldwide regions.

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The given pie charts give datas in the proportion of water consumption in specific sectors that take place in six worldwide regions. Overall, water utilisation for agriculture accounts for the highest fraction of almost all continents excepts North America and Europe. In addition, the amount of water used for domestic and industry is usually at approximately the same low level in four of the six regions. Maintaining at 88 percent, Central Asia holds the leading place as the region using the most water for agriculture, compared to that sector in Europe merely constituted 32%. Stimulately, in some areas with the developed industry, for instance Europe, the water comsumed for this field can be up to nearly fifty parts hundred while Central Asia ocupies only five parts hundred. In term of domestic use, regardless of 19% of water use in South America, data in Central Asia has percisely equal proportions with that in South East Asia at just 7%. To conclude, depending on the key economic goals of this regions, the amount of water utilized for that sector will be higher.
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consumption in specific sectors that take place in six worldwide regions.

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for agriculture, compared to that sector in Europe
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while Central Asia
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ocupies
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five parts
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. In term of domestic
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, regardless of 19% of
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in South America, data in Central Asia has
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utilized for that sector will be higher.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts give datas in the proportion of water consumption in specific sectors that take place in six worldwide regions.

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