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The chart below details the waste disposal in one European country between 2005 and 2008.

The chart below details the waste disposal in one European country between 2005 and 2008. XE59N
The given bar graph illustrates the information about the data of three distinct type of the waste disposal in particular European country in for consecutive years from 2005 to 2008. Overall, it is noticed that the landfill waste was the highest waste disposal in European nation in all years expect 2008. Also, in all years experienced an upward trend in burning waste disposal. At a first looking, in 2005, landfill waste was the maximum in a country of Europe, that was exactly 1800 million tonnes, but it showed a downward trend through the given period of time in 2008, it reached a 600, 000, 000 tonnes. There was no change in waste dumping at sea till 2008. In addition, waste accounted from burning was around 400, 000, 000 tonnes in 2005, while it increase the minimally in all years in 2006 and 2007 was exactly 600, 000, 000 tonnes and around 8, 000, 000 tonnes respectively, whereas in 2008 burning waste was the highest than other waste.
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European country in for consecutive years from 2005 to 2008.

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was the highest
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disposal in European nation in all years
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2008.
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first
looking, in 2005, landfill
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was the maximum in a country of Europe, that was exactly 1800 million tonnes,
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but
it
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showed
a downward trend through the
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period of time in 2008, it reached a 600, 000, 000 tonnes. There was no
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change
in
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waste
dumping at sea till 2008.

In addition
,
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accounted from burning was around 400, 000, 000 tonnes in 2005, while it increase the
minimally
in all years in 2006 and 2007 was exactly 600, 000, 000 tonnes and around 8, 000, 000 tonnes
respectively
, whereas in 2008 burning
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was the
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