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The given maps throw light on the information of modification of city from 1950 to present time with the population of individuals.

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The given maps throw light on the information of modification of city from 1950 to present time with the population of individuals 20, 000 and 200, 000 respectively. Overall, these images explain, these is a huge development in city of current time as compared to the city of 1950. The residential areas has been expanded as well as the enhancement in business district has occurred. To initiate with, there is a significant growth in residential area as well as the population in presently map. The living area has surrounded whole city. Whereas, it was just a small portion in 1950 on the north of business district. However, the business district also has been expanded across the lake towards the south. There was a single bridge in 1950 above the river. Whereas, now the city contains two bridges, one connecting the business district while, other is joining the major roads over the lake. In the recent map there is establishment of dam southeast corner. In addition to this, the airport has been elongated is size and the major road has bee constructed on southward from west to east. The government buildings have became twice in nunber on either side of southeast major road. The area of river is identical in both the given maps of city.
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throw light on the information of modification of city from 1950 to present time with the population of individuals 20, 000 and 200, 000
respectively
.

Overall
, these images
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a huge development in city of
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time as compared to the city of 1950. The residential
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been expanded
as well
as the enhancement in
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district
has occurred.

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as well
as the population in
presently
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. The living
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has surrounded whole city.
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.
However
, the
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also
has
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across the lake towards the south. There was a single bridge in 1950 above the river. Whereas,
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now
the city contains two bridges, one connecting the
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business
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district
while, other is joining the major roads over the lake. In the recent
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there is establishment of dam southeast corner.

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been elongated
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constructed on southward from west to east. The
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on either side of southeast major road. The
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of river is identical in both the
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IELTS academic The given maps throw light on the information of modification of city from 1950 to present time with the population of individuals.

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