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The given map provides information about the enhancement of Felixstone in two periods, starting from 1967 and ending in 2001.

The given map provides information about the enhancement of Felixstone in two periods, starting from 1967 and ending in 2001. Mg9L
The given map provides information about the enhancement of Felixstone in two periods, starting from 1967 and ending in 2001. Overall, it is noticeable that over the period the area had changed significantly. Food industry including farmland and fishing markets has been removed and replaced by the tourist industry. According to the map, it can be clearly seen that the golf field did not change and keep it in place. On the east side of the golf course, 10 shops were located on the high street and after 34 years the number of shops were reduced by 2 and on the opposite side of shops 8 apartments were established. Surprisingly, the farm land vanished and there was a hotel with a swimming pool and 2 tennis courts. On the other side of main street where the fishing industry, including marina, pier and fishing market was taking half of the beach part. However, these businesses were replaced with private and public beaches. Between the private beach and hotel was a cafe, and this facility did not change after years. Moreover, a hotel which is close to the sea expanded by opening a car park. Following that, on the west side of the hotel located dunes and trees. Next 34 years, there were constructed wind turbines, and the number of trees cut-down by one fifth.
The
given
map provides information about the enhancement of
Felixstone
in two periods, starting from 1967 and ending in 2001.

Overall
, it is noticeable that over the period the area had
changed
significantly
. Food industry including farmland and fishing markets has
been removed
and replaced by the tourist industry.

According to the map, it can be
clearly
seen
that the golf field did not
change
and
keep
it in place. On the east side of the golf course, 10 shops
were located
on the high street and after 34 years the number of shops were
reduced
by 2 and on the opposite side of shops 8 apartments
were established
.
Surprisingly
, the farm land vanished and there was a
hotel
with a swimming pool and 2 tennis courts.

On the other side of main street where the fishing industry, including marina, pier and fishing market was taking half of the beach part.
However
, these businesses
were replaced
with private and public beaches. Between the private beach and
hotel
was a
cafe
, and this facility did not
change
after years.
Moreover
, a
hotel
which is close to the sea expanded by opening a car park. Following that, on the west side of the
hotel
located dunes and trees.
Next
34 years, there
were constructed
wind turbines, and the number of trees
cut
-down by one fifth.
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IELTS academic The given map provides information about the enhancement of Felixstone in two periods, starting from 1967 and ending in 2001.

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