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The given graph chart illustrates the number of researcher students, both male and female, studying several science-related subjects at the a UK university in 2009.

The given graph chart illustrates the number of researcher students, both male and female, studying several science-related subjects at the a UK university in 2009. yPL1D
The given graph chart illustrates the number of researcher students, both male and female, studying several science-related subjects at the a UK university in 2009. Overall, it can be seen that in every course, men were the highest numbers of researcher students and the peak is noticeable in Bbiology with almost 250 male students. While the lowest point for females was in Physics’ course. According to the data, Biology and Physics have had the highest numbers of male research students during 2009, both with more than 200 students. Medicine too had an enrollment of 200 male people. The lowest number register is noticeable in veterinary medicine, with almost 100 of male researchers, while women students in this field are almost 150. Geology and Astronomy had the same exact number of members.
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were the highest
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and the peak is noticeable in
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Bbiology
with almost 250 male
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students
. While the lowest point for females was in Physics’ course.

According to the data, Biology and Physics have had the highest
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of male research
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students
during 2009, both with more than 200
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students
. Medicine too had an enrollment of 200 male
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people
. The lowest
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register is noticeable in veterinary medicine, with almost 100 of male researchers, while women
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students
in this field are almost 150. Geology and Astronomy had the same exact
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of members.

IELTS academic The given graph chart illustrates the number of researcher students, both male and female, studying several science-related subjects at the a UK university in 2009.

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