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The ​given charts illustrate the distribution of world's water, and usage in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for agricultural, domestic and industrial purpose.

The ​given charts illustrate the distribution of world's water, and usage in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for agricultural, domestic and industrial purpose. aA5nY
The given charts illustrate the distribution of world's water, and usage in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for agricultural, domestic and industrial purpose. Overall, majority of water available as salt water while, fresh is merely less on the earth. On the other hand, the lowest amount of water used by Egypt for industrial purpose whereas, Canada uses the highest amount of water. It can be seen that, 97% of water exist as salt water, and 3% of water as fresh water. Furthermore, fresh water is divided in three parts which are, ground water, surface water, and ice and glacier water. Merely, 1% of water available as surface water meanwhile, 79% as ice and glaciers. It is clear from the second chat that, Egypt, and Canada consume equal amount of water for agriculture and industry which is 80%. Additionally, the usage of water in agriculture is slightly decreased in Saudi Arabia, which is under 80%. After that, it drastically fall down in Canada at 10%. Moreover, Egypt and Saudi Arabia uses equal water for agriculture and domestic sectors, which is above 10%.
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available as salt
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the highest amount of water.

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exist as salt
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, and 3% of
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as fresh
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, surface
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, and ice and glacier
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available as surface
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meanwhile, 79% as ice and glaciers.

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from the second chat that, Egypt, and Canada consume equal amount of
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for agriculture and industry which is 80%.
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in agriculture is
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IELTS academic The ​given charts illustrate the distribution of world's water, and usage in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for agricultural, domestic and industrial purpose.

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