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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. 2X0X
The Chart illustrate the enrollment of number of girls per 100 boys in different section of school education such as primary education, secondary education and tertiary education. The chart also point out girls over 100 boys enrollment in developing countries againts the developed countries. The chart create a difference over a period of one year between enrollment of girls in each sector. Primary education of girls in developing countries is fewer than in developed countires however after a year there is an increase of 5 girls over 100 boys in developing countries but only a 1 girl over 100 boys in developed countries. The target of 100 boys over girls enrollment only achieved by the tertiary education section in developed countries altough the same tertiary section in developing counrties is at major decent but has gain a rise in over a year. The seconday section of developed countries is just inches away from reaching the target while the same section at developing countries is still far away from reaching the given target. The chart shows the rise in every section on developed countries however it seems to have shown an fall from primary to tertiary in developing counrties.
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, secondary
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and tertiary
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developing
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in each sector. Primary
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the same tertiary
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