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The chart illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide emissions per person in Britain, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. Overall, a closer look at the line chart highlights the fact that the amount of CO2 emissions per head in Italy and Portugal witnessed a considerable increase while the figures for that of Sweden and the UK decreased throughout the period of time. Beginning at nearly 11 tonnes, the amount of Co2 dumped per head in Britain saw a steady decrease to under 9 tonnes in 2007. Also, the figure for that in Sweden experienced an increase to over 10 tonnes before decreasing significantly to nearly 5 tonnes in 2007 On the contrary, over the first thirty years, the amount of Co2 discharged per person in both Italy and Portugal rose slightly to nearly 8 and 5 tonnes respectively. After then, the figure for that in Portugal increased continiously to the end of the course. At the meantime, the figure for that in Italy stayed unchanged.

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