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The graph illustrates the number of students in one of the Kaplan International Colleges who learn English throughout the year in 2009. Overall, the number of students in 2009 quite fluctuates. It was rising significantly between May and August, with the highest number of students coming in August, counted for 350 students. However, it shows a decline in the following months just right after that peak. As seen in the chart, the inclining of the number of students in 2009 happened in two periods: January to April and May to August. From January to April, the number was escalated to two times higher. Comparatively, the increase was greater in the other period, rising by almost 400% from May. The decline also occurred in 2009. Firstly, despite the noticeable increase that began in May, the number was decreased by half from April. Additionally, a gradual drop happened from September to the end of the year, which ends with 100 students in December 2009.
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Overall
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in 2009 quite fluctuates. It was rising
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between May and August, with the highest
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of
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coming in August, counted for 350
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in the chart, the inclining of the
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of
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in 2009 happened in two periods: January to April and May to August. From January to April, the
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was escalated
to two times higher.
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occurred in 2009.
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, despite the noticeable increase that began in May, the
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was decreased
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in December 2009.
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IELTS academic Number of students who learn English

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