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The graph shows about demographic rate in Scotland

The graph shows about demographic rate in Scotland nNpeK

The diagram gives information about demographic changes, which are birth ratw, population growth and death rate in Scontland from 1940 to 2020. Overall, it can be seen clear from the graph that all modes of demographic rate are decreased at the end of the year, however at first the birth rate was in its highest. Firstly, the number of babies born in Scotland about 2. 5%and it declined gradually in 1945, then there was a dramatically rise till 1950.

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, population growth and death rate in Possible spelling mistake found.Scotland
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 from 1940 to 2020. Overall
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 from the graph that all modes of demographic rate are decreased
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year, however
 at first
 the birth rate was in its highest. Firstly
, the number of babies born in Scotland about 2. 5%and it declined gradually
 in 1945, then there was a You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
dramatically rise
 till 1950. 