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The flowchart below shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The flowchart below shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles. Xgnw
They supplied diagram the demonstrates how glass bottles, collected from public are recycled. Overall, there are seven main stages in the recycling procedure, beginning with sorting the glasses into three types and making new bottles from melted glass mixture. Before transportation to the processing plant, glass bottles are collected and classified by colour (green, Brown and clear). Glass bottles are undergone classification and divided into bottles with metal and plastic caps. Then glass is broken by grinding machine and delivered to another plant, where glass is heated to a high temperature (1, 200 degree C) and melted. Finally, melted mixture is transported to The Glass factory, after that mixture is ready for producing new bottles which are ready for public using.
They supplied diagram the demonstrates how
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glass
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bottles
, collected from public
are recycled
.
Overall
, there are seven main stages in the recycling procedure, beginning with sorting the glasses into three types and making new
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bottles
from melted
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glass
mixture.
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Before
transportation to the processing plant,
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glass
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bottles
are collected
and classified by
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colour
(green, Brown and
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clear
).
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Glass
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bottles
are undergone classification and divided into
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bottles
with metal and plastic caps. Then
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glass
is broken
by grinding machine and delivered to another plant, where
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glass
is heated
to a high temperature (1, 200 degree C) and melted.
Finally
, melted mixture
is transported
to The
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Glass
factory, after that mixture is ready for producing new
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bottles
which are ready for public using.

IELTS academic The flowchart below shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles.

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121 words
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