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The first pie graph below shows the number of eBooks sales as a percentage of all book sales from 1980 to 2010. The second displays the most popular genres in eBooks in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These pie charts compare the amount of sold ebooks in four years and the popularity of various genres in 2010. The given pie charts elucidate that the most ebooks that have been sold were in 2010 and the most popular genre in that year was romance. The most ratio of sold ebooks belongs to 2010(59%), which was followed by 2000(23%). The percentage of purchased ebooks in 1990(10%) is approximately one sixth of 2010. Furthermore, the lowest ratio belongs to 1980 with 8% sold ebook, which was about one third of 2000. In 2010, the romance genre had the most popularity (48%) among individuals compared to other types of ebooks, which was nearly the genre of half ebooks that were sold in 2010 and followed by the crime electronic books with the popularity of 21%, which had the percentage almost as high as bio genre with 20% popularity among people. The self-help type of ebooks had the lowest ratio in the pie chart(11%) that illustrates this type of electronic book had the least number of fans compared with other ones in 2010.
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of various genres in 2010. The
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in that year was romance.

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in 1990(10%) is approximately one sixth of 2010.
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, which was about one third of 2000.

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had the most
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ebooks
, which was
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of half
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that
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in 2010 and followed by the crime electronic books with the
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of 21%, which had the percentage almost as high as bio
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with 20%
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people
. The self-
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help
type of
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had the lowest ratio in the pie chart(11%) that illustrates this type of electronic book had the least number of fans compared with other ones in 2010.
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IELTS academic The first pie graph below shows the number of eBooks sales as a percentage of all book sales from 1980 to 2010. The second displays the most popular genres in eBooks in 2010.

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