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Government spending on tourist infrastructure

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The line graph demonstrates the spending of government on tourist infrastructure for four countries(Franch, UK, Germany and Spain). Overall, the Franch and the UK show the same upward trend from the year 2010 to 2022, Whereas Germany and Spain compete among themselves to hold the third position, in terms of government spending on tourist infrastructure. In 2010, around $54 billion was spent by the French government and this amount increased as years passed, and this number will reach its peak in 2022, the estimated amount is $85 billion. The spending of the UK government follows the same trend as French, it was $20 billion in the year 2010 and expected to reach a little lower than $80 billion in 2022. However, the government of Spain spent the highest among these four countries in 2010 on tourist infrastructure, Surprisingly, it decrease gradually until 2018 after that dramatic fall have been shown, and estimated it will reach just over $10 billion in 2022, which is the lowest among others. The spending of the German government goes up slowly from 2010 to 2020($30 billion to approximately $65billion).
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the same upward trend from the year 2010 to 2022, Whereas Germany and Spain compete among themselves to hold the third position, in terms of
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In 2010, around $54
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by the French
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and this amount increased as years passed, and this number will reach its peak in 2022, the estimated amount is $85
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follows the same trend as French, it was $20
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in the year 2010 and
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lower than $80
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in 2022.

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of Spain spent the highest among these four countries in 2010 on tourist infrastructure,
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over $10
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in 2022, which is the lowest among others. The
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IELTS academic Government spending on tourist infrastructure

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