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The charts below shows the percentage of five different kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons were relevant.

The charts below shows the percentage of five different kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. lKYo
The provided pie charts manifest imformation about the proportion of five different books which were sold by a bookseller from 1972 to 2012. Overall, it is evident that the adult fiction books were most popular as compared to other types of books in the given time period. At the first glance, it is lucid that the proportion of adult fiction books was 20% in 1972 and 25% in 1992. After increasing sharply, it reached at 45% in 2012 which is the highest percentage. However, the percentage of children's fiction books was 20%, 22% and 25% in 1972, 1992 and 2012, respectively. Moving further, the percentage of biography books hovered under 20% throughout the given time period which is the least percentage. Moreover, the proportion of travel books after increasing gradually from 15% in 1972 to 18% in 1992. In 2012, it decreased and stood at 10%. In terms of others books, 13 percent difference was seen that between 1972 and 2012.
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were most popular as compared to other types of
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first
glance, it is lucid that the proportion of adult fiction
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books
was 20% in 1972 and 25% in 1992. After increasing
sharply
, it reached at 45% in 2012 which is the highest
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percentage
.
However
, the
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of children's fiction
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was 20%, 22% and 25% in 1972, 1992 and 2012,
respectively
.

Moving
further
, the
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percentage
of biography
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books
hovered under 20% throughout the
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given
time period which is the least
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.
Moreover
, the proportion of travel
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after increasing
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from 15% in 1972 to 18% in 1992. In 2012, it decreased and stood at 10%. In terms of others
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, 13 percent difference was
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that between 1972 and 2012.

IELTS academic The charts below shows the percentage of five different kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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