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The chart below shows the results of of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. rQj6
The bar chart provides the information about the results of a survey about individuals coffee and tea purchasing and drinking habits in five Australian cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, we can see in last 4 weeks people went to a cafe for coffee and tea in five cities of Australia proposition was highest. In five cities people are less interested to bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. In Hobart, last 4 weeks people went to bought fresh coffee proportion was more than 50% while bought instant coffee ratio was less than 40%. In last 4 weeks individuals bought fresh coffee for Brisbane and Adelaide rate was equal and it was 34% approximately. Brisbane and Adelaide people bought instant coffee rates work 53%, 49% respectively. Furthermore, Melboume and sydney people bought fresh and instant coffee ratio were 48% and 46%. In Sydney individuals bought fresh coffee proportion was higher than Melboume. In last 4 weeks Melboume people went to cafe for coffee and tea ratio was highest and made up to 63% while Adelaide proportion was loewest and it was 49%. Moreover, in Sydney people went to cafe rate more than 60% and Brisbane ratio made up to 49%. Eventually, Hobart ratio was 62%.
The bar chart provides the information about the results of a survey about individuals
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and tea purchasing and drinking habits in five Australian cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

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and tea in five cities of Australia proposition was highest. In five cities
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are less interested to
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in last 4 weeks.

In Hobart, last 4
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proportion was more than 50% while
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instant
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for Brisbane and Adelaide rate was equal and it was 34% approximately. Brisbane and Adelaide
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rates work 53%, 49%
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were 48% and 46%. In Sydney individuals
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proportion was higher than
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and tea
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was highest and made up to 63% while Adelaide proportion was
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and it was 49%.
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rate more than 60% and Brisbane
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made up to 49%.
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, Hobart
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was 62%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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