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the diagrams below show the maps of the bookstore in 2000 and the same area at the present time

the diagrams below show the maps of the bookstore in 2000 and the same area at the present time KyKp9
The diagrams illustrate changes in the design change of the bookstore from 2000 to the present. At the first glance, the most noticeable change is the rearrangement of some positions of the book area. Moreover, they added tables and chairs in the center of the book shop and replaced the non-fiction into a café counter. In 2000, many book sections example: the non-fiction, service desk which is southwest corner of the bookstore, but at the present, it has been moved to right-hand side of the table and chair, and a new café counter is built in its old place.
The diagrams illustrate
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changes
in the design
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change
of the bookstore from 2000 to the present.

At the
first
glance, the most noticeable
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change
is the rearrangement of
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some
positions of the book area.
Moreover
, they
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added
tables and chairs in the center of the book shop and replaced the non-fiction into a café counter.

In 2000,
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many
book sections example: the non-fiction, service desk which is southwest corner of the bookstore,
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but
at the present, it has been
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moved
to right-hand side of the table and chair, and a new café counter
is built
in its
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old
place.
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IELTS academic the diagrams below show the maps of the bookstore in 2000 and the same area at the present time

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