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Describe the body diagram below.

Describe the body diagram below. 3LnDX
The given diagram of body reveals the information of external and internal body parts with their functions. In the picture, There are many external parts are seen on upper part where nose is for smelling, mouth is for eating food and speaking, eyes are for seeing visuals and ears for hearing. brain which is internal part is situated near ears controls the nervous system of the body. In the middle part of body, lungs breaths the oxygen and oxygenate the blood. The heart circulate the blood in the body from arteries and veins. Arteries take blood and veins give blood from the heart. Besides heart liver is located which generally stores glycogen. stomach is the center part which digests protein. All in all, whole body depends on legs. however, nerves which are connected with brains shows impulses from brain.
The
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given
diagram of
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body
reveals the information of external and internal
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body
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parts
with their functions.

In the picture, There are
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many
external
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parts
are
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seen
on upper
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part
where nose is for smelling, mouth is for eating food and speaking, eyes are for seeing visuals and ears for hearing.
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brain
which is internal
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part
is situated
near ears controls the nervous system of the body.

In the middle
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part
of
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body
, lungs breaths the oxygen and oxygenate the
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blood
. The heart
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circulate
the
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blood
in the
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body
from arteries and veins. Arteries take
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blood
and veins give
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blood
from the heart.
Besides
heart liver
is located
which
generally
stores glycogen.
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stomach
is the center
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part
which digests protein.

All in all, whole
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body
depends on legs.
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however
, nerves which
are connected
with brains
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shows
impulses from brain.
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IELTS academic Describe the body diagram below.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
139 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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