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The chart below shows the percentage of water used in different sectors, such as for domestic use, agriculture and industry in 4 countries.

The tabular chart illustrates the proportion of water was used for three different types of sectors in Egypt, Canada, Saudia Arabia and New Zealand. Overall, the maximum ratio of water was consumed in Egypt for agricultural purposes, whereas the minimum proportion of water which was used by household sector in same nation. In Egypt 10 percent of water which was utilized for agricultural purpose, but double fold proportion of water was consumed for domestic purpose. The highest ratio of water was used in agricultural purpose which was observed in Egypt, on the contrast least percent of water was used for industrial purposes.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of water used in different sectors, such as for domestic use, agriculture and industry in 4 countries.

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