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The diagram gives information about the ketchup-making process.

The diagram gives information about the ketchup-making process. 2lo5X

The diagram gives information about the ketchup-making process. Overall, a closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that there are fifteen main stages in this process, beginning with the picking of tomatoes and placing them in baskets and ending with the delivery of ketchup to supermarkets. Looking at the diagram in more detail, the first step of the tomato process is selected by workers and placed in baskets, then the tomatoes are sorted before being sent to the factory. The seeds and stalks are then removed from the tomatoes and then placed in a barrel for crushing. Then it is added with some sugar salt, and next to the vinegar is boiled. In the following step of process, the mixture is left to sit for two hours, then the ketchup mixture is poured into the bottle. Once the bottles have been filled, they are labeled and sent to quality control, where it is carefully selected before shipping to the supermarket.

The diagram gives information about the ketchup-making process.

Overall
, a closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that there are fifteen main stages in this process, beginning with the picking of tomatoes and placing them in baskets and ending with the delivery of ketchup to supermarkets.

Looking at the diagram in more detail, the first
 step of the tomato process is selected
 by workers and placed in baskets, then the tomatoes are sorted
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before
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sent
 to the factory. The seeds and stalks are then removed from the tomatoes and then placed in a barrel for crushing. Then it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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some
 sugar salt, and next
 to the vinegar is boiled
.

In the following step of process, the mixture is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to sit for two hours, then the ketchup mixture is poured
 into the bottle. Once the bottles have been filled
, they are labeled
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sent
 to quality control, where it is carefully
 selected This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 shipping to the supermarket. 