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A glance at the given figure illustrates how to produce tomato ketchup.

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A glance at the given figure illustrates how to produce tomato ketchup. Overall, a closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that process of production involves 15 separate stages, commencing with harvesting tomato and ending with using tomato ketchup with food. Looking at the figure in the more detail, in the initaial stage, the tomatoes are picked and put in basket after being sorted into 2 categories, good and bad. Subsequently, they are sent to factory by truck where the tomatoes are removed into stalk, seeds and skin. After which, removed tomatoes are put in container where they are crushed into liquid before being added with sugar, vinagar and salt. the resulting mixture is then boiled and prepared for the following stages. Once having been boiled mixture, it is left about two hour before being put in bottles which they is labeled in the next step. In the following stages, leabeled bottles are quality controlled by human and packed in box. The entire tomato ketchup producing process concludess after the ketchup box are transported to supermakets for sale to customers.
A glance at the
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figure illustrates how to produce tomato ketchup.

Overall
, a closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that process of production involves 15 separate stages, commencing with harvesting tomato and ending with using tomato ketchup with food.

Looking at the figure in the more detail, in the
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initaial
stage, the tomatoes
are picked
and put in basket after
being sorted
into 2 categories,
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good
and
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bad
.
Subsequently
, they are
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sent
to factory by truck where the tomatoes
are removed
into stalk, seeds and skin. After which, removed tomatoes
are put
in container where they
are crushed
into liquid
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before
being
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added
with sugar,
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vinagar
and salt.
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the
resulting mixture is then boiled and prepared for the following stages.

Once having
been boiled
mixture, it is
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left
about two
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hour
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before
being put
in bottles which they
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is
labeled in the
next
step. In the following stages,
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leabeled
bottles are quality controlled by human and packed in box. The entire tomato ketchup producing process
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concludess
after the ketchup box
are transported
to
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supermakets
for sale to customers.
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IELTS academic A glance at the given figure illustrates how to produce tomato ketchup.

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