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The diagram shows the production and recycling of glass containers.

The diagram shows the production and recycling of glass containers. ApNN3

The given diagrams illustrate the steps involved in making glass containers and, in the recycling process. Overall, there are four steps in the production and five steps are in the recycling. for the making process, sand, soda ash and limestone are required. With regard to production, santld soda Ash and limestone are mixed together. After that, glass furnace is heated high enough to melt all the products, at 1500 degree Celsius temperature. Once melting was done, molten glass was used to shape the glass containers. Glass containers are ready to sold in the market. Glass recycling is begin with the raw material, which is the used containers. Following that, they are segregated by the colours, so that all colour will not mix with each other. Having being sorted, all containers are washed to remove the containments. Subsequently, crushing and melting is done. Lastly, they are given shapes according to their usage, a new products are ready to occupy the space.

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given
 diagrams illustrate the steps involved in making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
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containers
 and, in the recycling process.

Overall
, there are four steps in the production and five steps are in the recycling. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 the making process, sand, soda ash and limestone are required
.

With regard to production, Possible spelling mistake found.wantedSantasandmantleSandSantos
santld
 soda Ash and limestone are mixed
 together. After that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 furnace is heated
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enough
 to melt all the products, at 1500 degree Celsius temperature. Once melting was done
, molten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to shape the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
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containers
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
Glass
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containers
 are ready to sold in the market.

Glass recycling is Consider using a past participle here: "begun".begun
begin
 with the raw material, which is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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containers
. Following that, they are segregated
 by the Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that all Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 will not mix with each other. Having being sorted
, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
containers
are washed
 to remove the Possible spelling mistake found.containment
containments
. Subsequently
, crushing and melting is done
. Lastly
, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 shapes according to their usage, a new Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "product"?product
products
 are ready to occupy the space. 