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The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm

The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm PVkag
The picture provides information about the different stages of silkworm life Overall, there are four main stages in the process of silkworm development, beginning with eggs are laied on a leaf and ending with an adult moth. At first stage, a female moth give birth an eggs on the leaf. After 10 days, eggs convert to silkworm larva and eating mulberry leaf for survival purpose. These larva make a silk thread at the third stage for 4-6 weeks from larva stage. Before being an adult moth, they spend at least 3-6 days to become cocoon. In the final stage, cocoon is fully adult after 16 days and is ready to mate. The cycle will then continue again.
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of silkworm life

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, there are four main
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in the process of silkworm development, beginning with eggs are
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laied
on a leaf and ending with an adult moth.

At
first
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stage
, a female moth give birth an eggs on the leaf. After 10 days, eggs convert to silkworm larva and eating mulberry leaf for survival purpose.
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These larva
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a silk thread at the third
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for 4-6 weeks from larva
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being an adult moth, they spend at least 3-6 days to become cocoon. In the final
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, cocoon is
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adult after 16 days and is ready to mate. The cycle will then continue again.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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