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According to the reading passage, three names are proposed as the potential authors of the Voynich manuscript, a weird and mysterious book written on vellum that looks like 16th century's books.

According to the reading passage, three names are proposed as the potential authors of the Voynich manuscript, a weird and mysterious book written on vellum that looks like 16th century's books. r8b7J
According to the reading passage, three names are proposed as the potential authors of the Voynich manuscript, a weird and mysterious book written on vellum that looks like 16th century's books. However, the listening passage disagrees with the ideas put forward in the reading passage. In the line with the author's attitude, Anthony Ascham could be the writer of the manuscript and because of that the manuscript could be a scientific subject hidden in the codes. In contrast, the lecturer rejects the claim raised in the reading passage and sets out some information about the Ascham's inferior jobs and books back then which crosses his name out as a possible candidate for such powerful manuscript. Moreover, the writer believes that this manuscript is without meaning or is fake, and Edward Kelley wrote it to took money from rich people by pretending that the manuscript was so magical. On the other hand, the speaker argues that, 400 years ago, the general knowledge of the people was low and there was no need for a delinquent to put lots of efforts on writing such an amazing manuscript. Building upon this fact, this theory is also off the table. Furthermore, the lecturer calls into question the point presented by the writer that, Wilfird Voynich himself wrote the manuscript in order to gain some respect and reputation. Ironically, on the basis of the speaker's assert, one could see that, the vellum and the ink used in the manuscript are aged about 400 years that makes it impossible for the Voynich to create the book. As a recap, although the reading passage provides some evidence to support the idea that whether Ascham, Kelley or Voynich are the possible authors of a found enigmatic manuscript resorting to some theories, the listening passage challenges these indications and opposes this conclusion.
According to the
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, three names
are proposed
as the potential authors of the
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Voynich
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manuscript
, a weird and mysterious book written on vellum that looks like 16th century's books.
However
, the listening
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disagrees with the
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ideas
put forward in the
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passage.

In the line with the author's attitude, Anthony
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Ascham
could be the writer of the
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manuscript
and
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because
of that the
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manuscript
could be a scientific subject hidden in the codes.
In contrast
, the lecturer rejects the claim raised in the
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reading
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passage
and sets out
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some
information about the
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Ascham
's inferior jobs and books back then which crosses his name out as a possible candidate for such powerful manuscript.

Moreover
, the writer believes that this
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manuscript
is without meaning or is fake, and Edward Kelley wrote it to took money from rich
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people
by pretending that the
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manuscript
was
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so
magical.
On the other hand
, the speaker argues that, 400 years ago, the general knowledge of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
was low and there was no need for a delinquent to put lots of efforts on writing such an amazing
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manuscript
. Building upon this fact, this theory is
also
off the table.

Furthermore
, the lecturer calls into question the point presented by the writer that,
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Wilfird
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Voynich
himself wrote the
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manuscript
in order to gain
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some
respect and reputation.
Ironically
, on the basis of the speaker's assert, one could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that, the vellum and the ink
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used
in the
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manuscript
are aged
about 400 years that
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makes
it impossible for the
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Voynich
to create the book.

As a recap, although the
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reading
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provides
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some
evidence to support the
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idea
that whether
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Ascham
, Kelley or
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Voynich
are the possible authors of a found enigmatic
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manuscript
resorting to
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some
theories, the listening
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passage
challenges these indications and opposes this conclusion.

IELTS academic According to the reading passage, three names are proposed as the potential authors of the Voynich manuscript, a weird and mysterious book written on vellum that looks like 16th century's books.

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5 paragraphs
303 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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