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The diagram shows how sports shoes are made. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows how sports shoes are made. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features. J0Pnk
The given figure illustrates the procedures used to make sports shoes. As a whole, there are three major steps, which are ordering, processing, and shipping, Firstly, a customer orders a specifics type of shoes online. After that, the company would import raw materials such as: leather from Tannery-Leather, fabric from Mill-Fabric and rubber sole from the other factory. As soon as all materials arrive, different specialist workers will start cutting out a proper shape of the leather, sew the uppers, glue tops and bottoms parts together, and, finally, put in the rubber sole. Those complete shoes are then packaged into hundreds of boxes before loading into the containers, which will be transported to the post-office before either arriving at the shop and be ready to sell out, or exporting through the ships. Generally, the whole procedures take approximately around eighteen months to be completed. Top
The
given
figure illustrates the procedures
used
to
make
sports shoes. As a whole, there are three major steps, which are ordering, processing, and shipping,

Firstly
, a customer orders a specifics type of shoes online. After that, the
company
would import raw materials such as: leather from Tannery-Leather, fabric from Mill-Fabric and rubber sole from the other factory. As
soon
as all materials arrive,
different
specialist workers will
start
cutting out a proper shape of the leather, sew the uppers, glue tops and bottoms parts together, and,
finally
, put in the rubber sole.

Those complete shoes are then packaged into hundreds of boxes
before
loading into the containers, which will
be transported
to the post-office
before
either arriving at the shop and be ready to sell out, or exporting through the ships.
Generally
, the whole procedures take approximately around eighteen months to
be completed
.

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IELTS academic The diagram shows how sports shoes are made. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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