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Essay task 2, trends of human nature

Essay task 2, trends of human nature NleK2
it is acknowledged by a number of people that ____ is a beneficial trend, meanwhile, others oppose if it is leading to adverse consequences. This essay agrees that ____ can have a detrimental influence on ____ by____. Fair to mention that ____ is a crucial problem in nowadays society. It is believed that humanity is increasingly concerned by the side effects of____ on____. Let us look into it closer. As mentioned earlier, studies show that _____. For instance, _____. Another example of _____ is _____. In contrast, some people hold the view that _____. In conclusion, for a significant percentage of population, ______ is less essential than _____ because of _____. As shown above, advantages outweigh disadvantages. Consequently, it is fair to say that ____ is a positive trend.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
is acknowledged
by a number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
that ____ is a beneficial trend, meanwhile, others oppose if it is leading to adverse consequences. This essay
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agrees
that ____ can have a detrimental influence on ____ by____.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Fair
to mention that ____ is a crucial problem
nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: "nowadays".
in nowadays
society. It
is believed
that humanity is
increasingly
concerned by the side effects of____ on____.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
us look into it closer. As mentioned earlier, studies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
that _____.
For instance
, _____. Another example of _____ is _____.

In contrast
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
hold the view that _____.

In conclusion
, for a significant percentage of population, ______ is less essential than _____
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of _____. As shown above, advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Consequently
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
to say that ____ is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
trend.

IELTS academic Essay task 2, trends of human nature

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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