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The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Adal
The figure represents the seven steps that bees are required to producing honey. Overall, the folwers are the main source of honey since they provid bees by Nectra which converts finally to honey. Firstly, a group of bees leave their hive forword a flowers to collect the nectar and reback for thier countainer. Furthermore, the hive consists of many connected series cells so the bees insert their combined nectars in each cells. Secondly, After adding the sweet liquid into cells, the draying process is starting by a group of bees that using their wings for evaporating the waters in nectar. Finally, the honey is combined by cutting and presuring on a part of hive and fill it in cups.
The figure represents the seven steps that bees
are required
to producing honey.
Overall
, the
folwers
are the main source of honey since they
provid
bees by
Nectra
which converts
finally
to honey.

Firstly
, a group of bees
leave
their hive
forword
a flowers
to collect the nectar and
reback
for
thier
countainer
.
Furthermore
, the hive consists of
many
connected series cells
so
the bees insert their combined
nectars
in each
cells
.

Secondly
, After adding the sweet liquid into cells, the
draying
process is starting by a group of bees that using their wings for evaporating the waters in nectar.
Finally
, the honey
is combined
by cutting and
presuring
on a part of hive and fill it in cups.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
119 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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