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The diagram illistrates the process of producing carbonated drinks. Overall, it consists of five stages starting with water cleaning and finally leading to packaging and transport to supermarkets.

The diagram illistrates the process of producing carbonated drinks. Overall, it consists of five stages starting with water cleaning and finally leading to packaging and transport to supermarkets. nNKER
The diagram illistrates the process of producing carbonated drinks. Overall, it consists of five stages starting with water cleaning and finally leading to packaging and transport to supermarkets. Firstly the raw water is filtered, softened and chemically treated before being pumped to the next stage of heating, evaporation and carbonation. This is done by heating the water via electric heaters to induce evaporation. Furthermore, the evaporate is moved through cooling pipes and, comes to a stop in a chamber where carbon dioxide is pumped in. Thus in this chamber the two mix to form carbonated water. The carbonated water is then moved to the next stage, called mixing. In this stage the carbonated water is added to a large mixing tank, where the varies colourings, syrups and flavourings are introduced. The ingrediants are them mixed to produce the desired carbonated drink. This leads to the next stage, where the drink is filtered and filled into varies bottles and cans. Finaly the product is packed and shipped off to the supermarket to be sold.
The diagram
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illistrates
the process of producing
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carbonated
drinks.
Overall
, it consists of five
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stages
starting with
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water
cleaning and
finally
leading to packaging and transport to supermarkets.

Firstly
the raw
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water
is filtered
, softened and
chemically
treated
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before
being pumped
to the
next
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stage
of heating, evaporation and carbonation. This
is done
by heating the
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water
via electric heaters to induce evaporation.
Furthermore
,
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the evaporate
is
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moved
through cooling pipes and,
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comes
to a
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stop
in a chamber where carbon dioxide
is pumped
in.
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Thus
in this chamber the two mix to form
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carbonated
water.

The
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carbonated
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water
is then
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moved
to the
next
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stage
, called mixing. In this
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stage
the
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carbonated
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water
is
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added
to a large mixing tank, where the varies
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colourings
, syrups and
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flavourings
are introduced
. The
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ingrediants
are them mixed to produce the desired
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carbonated
drink. This leads to the
next
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stage
, where the drink
is filtered
and filled into varies bottles and cans.
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Finaly
the product
is packed
and shipped off to the supermarket to
be sold
.
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IELTS academic The diagram illistrates the process of producing carbonated drinks. Overall, it consists of five stages starting with water cleaning and finally leading to packaging and transport to supermarkets.

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6.0
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