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The diagram highlights the process by which manufactured bricks for industrial construction.

The diagram highlights the process by which manufactured bricks for industrial construction. JwBY0
The diagram highlights the process by which manufactured bricks for industrial construction. Overall, this process includes seven main stages, beginning with the preparation of clay and ending up with delivering products. In the first step of the process, the clay will be collected by the digger. After that, the clay will be placed on the metal grid and put on the roller, which breaks it into small debris. Subsequently, sand and water will be mixed with the clay, which after these building materials will be cast in a mould, or cut by wire cutter. In the next stage of the process, after being dried by drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. The kiln will be responsible for heating bricks in moderate and high temperatures, which are 200-800 degrees Celcius and 870-1300 degrees Celcius respectively. Then, the cooling chamber will reduce the bricks’ temperature from 2 to 3 days. At the end of the stage of the process, these bricks will be packed and get delivered by a truck.
The diagram highlights the
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by which manufactured
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bricks
for industrial construction.

Overall
, this
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process
includes seven main stages, beginning with the preparation of
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clay
and ending up with delivering products.

In the
first
step of the
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process
, the
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clay
will
be collected
by the digger. After that, the
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clay
will
be placed
on the metal grid and put on the roller, which breaks it into
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small
debris.
Subsequently
, sand and water will
be mixed
with the
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clay
, which after these building materials will
be cast
in a
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mould
, or
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cut
by wire cutter.

In the
next
stage of the
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process
, after
being dried
by drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. The kiln will be responsible for heating
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bricks
in moderate and high temperatures, which are 200-800 degrees
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Celcius
and 870-1300 degrees
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Celcius
respectively
. Then, the cooling chamber will
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reduce
the
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bricks’
temperature from 2 to 3 days.

At the
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end
of the stage of the
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process
, these
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bricks
will
be packed
and
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get
delivered by a truck.
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