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The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper
The diagram shows us about the steps to make pulps and papers from trees. Overall, it divided into two processes of manufacturing pulps from trees and transforming the pulps into papers. First, the trees are cut into logs. Second, they goes into chipping and digested along with purchased chips to produce pulps. Next, the pulps are cleaned in the washers and heading to the pulp screen, resulting a clean pulp. The clean pulps can be processed into two types of papers. To create rough papers like in the boxes, they need to be put in the pulp former. After that, they are dried and goes to the pulp reel. Finally, they are cut using the pulp cutter before they are ready to become paper bales. On the other hand, we can also make refined papers for printing purpose. The pulps need to be cleaned and dried first, then they can be pressed with pulp presses and paper presses. Lastly, they are dried again so the paper rolls are ready to be sold in the market.
The diagram
shows
us about the steps to
make
pulps and papers from trees.
Overall
, it divided into two processes of manufacturing pulps from trees and transforming the pulps into papers.

First
, the trees are
cut
into logs. Second, they
goes
into chipping and digested along with
purchased
chips to produce pulps.
Next
, the pulps
are cleaned
in the washers and heading to the pulp screen, resulting a clean pulp.

The clean pulps can
be processed
into two types of papers. To create rough papers like in the boxes, they need to
be put
in the pulp former. After that, they
are dried
and goes to the pulp reel.
Finally
, they are
cut
using the pulp cutter
before
they are ready to become paper bales.
On the other hand
, we can
also
make
refined papers for printing purpose. The pulps need to
be cleaned
and dried
first
, then they can
be pressed
with pulp presses and paper presses.
Lastly
, they
are dried
again
so
the paper rolls are ready to
be sold
in the market.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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