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The diagram gives information about recycling process of aluminium from scrap

The diagram gives information about recycling process of aluminium from scrap lNDD
The illustrated flowchart is a Clear presentation of aluminium recycling process to obtain pure aluminium from scrap. There are various stages in this process, which starts from aluminium scrap, and culminating with Packaging of recycled aluminium ingots. Turning to the details, firstly the primary process of collecting aluminium scrap is being segregated into pure and impure aluminium scrap. Then, both quantities of aluminium put into different containers. Next, the containers are heated on a furnace under the temperature at 1000+degree Celsius. Afterward, once the metal melts into molten state, then the container in which pure Aluminium is packaged, and secondly impure aluminium scrap are separated into pure and impure ignore ingots. Moving further, subsequently, the container in which pure aluminium inots is packed and the theirafter, the remaining impurities are disposed. Eventually, after the completion of packing phase, the containers are transferred into supermarkets for selling.
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presentation of
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aluminium
recycling process to obtain
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pure
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aluminium
from
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scrap
. There are various stages in this process, which
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starts
from
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aluminium
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scrap
, and culminating with Packaging of recycled
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aluminium
ingots.

Turning to the
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details
,
firstly
the primary process of collecting
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aluminium
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scrap
is
being segregated
into
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pure
and impure
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aluminium
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scrap
. Then, both quantities of
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aluminium
put into
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different
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containers
.
Next
, the
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containers
are heated
on a furnace under the temperature at 1000+degree Celsius. Afterward, once the metal melts into molten state, then the
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container
in which
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pure
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Aluminium
is packaged
, and
secondly
impure
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aluminium
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scrap
are separated
into
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pure
and impure
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ingots.

Moving
further
,
subsequently
, the
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container
in which
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pure
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aluminium
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inots
is packed
and the
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theirafter
, the remaining impurities
are disposed
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Eventually
, after the completion of packing phase, the
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containers
are transferred
into supermarkets for selling.
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IELTS academic The diagram gives information about recycling process of aluminium from scrap

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