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The diagram explains in which way avocado oil is produced.

The diagram explains in which way avocado oil is produced. 8LDjx

The diagram explains in which way avocado oil is produced. Overall, the process comprises ten stages. This process aims to get avocado oil, as well as worthy wase for the orchard. First of all, all gathered avocados are separated into rotten and fresh fruit by workers. Fresh ones are put into container to wash them. Then, they undergo blender to be chopped and delivered to "stage 1 centrifuge" where solid and liquids are separated under 45-50 degrees Celsius. In this step, solid waste is collected in other container for upcoming use. In the second centrifuge, separated water goes to waste, while obtained oil is filtered. Subsequently, clarified oil is got after the last stage. At the end of the process, clarified oil goes through dispenser to jar. After blender, avocados experience crusher, afterwards seeds and skins are separated. Additionally, solid waste, skins and seeds, as well as rotten fruit that are obtained through stages are put into van to orchard as a fertiliser.

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.

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 where solid and liquids are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisconnecteddistinctdistantdetachedremoveddivorced
separated
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use
. In the second centrifuge, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisconnecteddistinctdistantdetachedremoveddivorced
separated
 water goes to waste, while obtained You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
is filtered
. Subsequently
, clarified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
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got
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stage
. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the process, clarified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 goes through dispenser to jar.

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separated
. Additionally
, solid waste, skins and seeds, as well
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stages
are put
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fertiliser
. 