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The diagram demonstrates how bottles in plastic are prepared to reuse.

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The diagram demonstrates how bottles in plastic are prepared to reuse. It is a closed loop with a total of just three main steps beginning with collecting throwed-rubbish. First, all the leftover products are loaded into a specialized garbage truck and transferred to the Recycling centre for the sorting part directly by humans. Once having separated only the elastic things, they are compressed tightly into blocks for the purpose of easier movement, then crushed into small pieces and washed with water. The next stage involves transformation into usage materials. The pieces are entirely poured into a machine that produces pellets. These pellets are heated with a high temperature in order to prepare the raw-form substances that would be the core in the manufacture of products ranging from clothes, bottles to pencils and containers, and so on. These items are themselves recyclable and all the process begins again.
The diagram demonstrates how bottles in plastic
are prepared
to reuse.

It is a closed loop with a total of
just
three main steps beginning with collecting
throwed-rubbish
.

First
, all the leftover products
are loaded
into a specialized garbage truck and transferred to the Recycling
centre
for the sorting part
directly
by humans. Once having separated
only
the elastic things, they
are compressed
tightly
into blocks for the purpose of easier movement, then crushed into
small
pieces and washed with water.

The
next
stage involves transformation into usage materials. The pieces are
entirely
poured into a machine that produces pellets. These pellets
are heated
with a high temperature in order to prepare the raw-form substances that would be the core in the manufacture of products ranging from clothes, bottles to pencils and containers, and
so
on. These items are themselves recyclable and all the process
begins
again.
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates how bottles in plastic are prepared to reuse.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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