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producing electricity from a geothermal plant

producing electricity from a geothermal plant 73J9b

the diagram shows how geothermal plant power uses energy, and transform it into electricity. There is a total of five steps to done, and reach the desired outcome. first of all cold, cold water placed in a tank is pumped 4. 5 km down the ground, this water is heated by the help of hot rocks found underground. after that hot water is formed and pumped up into a condenser, which in turn will produce steam which will activate the turbine in a circular motion. finally he turbine will activate the generator, then producing electricity. this shows a summary of how the overall process of producing electricity from a geothermal plant is done.

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 energy, and transform it into electricity. There is a total of five steps to done, and reach the desired outcome. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
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 that hot water is formed
 and pumped up into a condenser, which in turn will produce steam which will activate the turbine in a circular motion. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?finally,
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 a summary of how the overall
 process of producing electricity from a geothermal plant is done
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