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The diagram below shows the working of Hydro-electric generation.

The diagram below shows the working of Hydro-electric generation. eeadB

The provide diagram elucidates the information of processing for generating hydro-electric power and distribute near the place who use electric power. To begin with, sea water is evaporated by the sun and with the help of heat, steam is evoluted in clouds. Evaporated clouds are contained amount of water and fall in different kind of places as a rain. Rain water is collected by the dam. Valve is connecting with dam for open and close operating when reservoir water necessary to use. What is more, valve is opened for use these water, to send in mechanical turbine machine. Turbine is converted mechanical power into electrical power. An electric power is joined with high voltage cable and usage water move forward to pump. However, reuse water again store in the dam through pump. Transformer station relieve an electric power. The electricity is maintained and distributed by transformer station via underground cable to nearest place such as hospital, school, factory, company. Overall, I pen down saying that, electric power generation is complex system but without wasting of reservoir water to use many time in turbine for generate electricity.

After 'The', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'provide' is correct. If 'provide' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
The provide
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power
 and distribute near the place who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmagneticelectrical
electric
 power.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
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water
is evaporated
 by the sun and with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of heat, steam is Possible spelling mistake found.revoluted
evoluted
 in clouds. Evaporated clouds are contained
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water
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different
 kind of places as a rain. Rain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is collected
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water
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use
.

What is more
, valve is opened
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use
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water
, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 in mechanical turbine machine. Turbine is converted
 mechanical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 into electrical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
. An You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmagneticelectrical
electric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 with high voltage cable and usage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 forward to pump. However
, reuse You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 again store in the dam through pump. Transformer station relieve an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmagneticelectrical
electric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
. The electricity is maintained
 and distributed by transformer station via underground cable to A determiner is probably missing here: "the nearest".the nearest
nearest
 place such as hospital, school, factory, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

Overall
, I pen down saying that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmagneticelectrical
electric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 generation is complex system This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 without wasting of reservoir You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
Did you mean "many times" or "much time"?many timesmuch time
many time
 in turbine for generate electricity. 