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The bar diagram shows a statistics on changes in GDP of three different countries.

The bar diagram shows a statistics on changes in GDP of three different countries. joayL
The prescribed bar graph compares the data about the different growth rates of GDP in three South Asian countries (India, Bangladesh and Burma) from 1985 to 2015. Overall, India had higher amount/percentage of GDP than that of Bangladesh and Burma in the given period. The highest GDP in India was in 2015 as opposed to Bangladesh and Burma in 2005 whereas the least GDP of India and Bangladesh was counted in 1985 as compared to Burma in 1990. The GDP of India and Burma fluctuated over the period while Bangladesh increased and remained stable in last fifteen years/end of the period. In terms of 1985, the GDP of India was about 12% as against of Bangladesh and Burma around 6% and 5% respectively. India has greater percentage of gross domestic products than that of Bangladesh and Burma in 1990(approximately 14%, 8% and 4% respectively). There were GDP growth rates just over 15% in India, below 5% in Bangladesh and approximately 6% in Burma in the year of 1995. While the gross domestic products as regards of 2015 In India was accurately 20%, Bangladesh and Burma had roughly below 15% and almost 8%. On the other hand, the difference in GDP among the given countries was very minimal in the remaining years. Around 15%, 12% and 10% were in India, Bangladesh and Burma respectively in case of 2000. In respect of 2005, the counted GDP for all the given countries levelled off at 14%. The percentage of GDP in India was figured out about 16% that was 2% higher than Bangladesh and Burma in 2010.
The prescribed bar graph compares the data about the
different
growth rates of GDP in three South Asian countries (India, Bangladesh and Burma) from 1985 to 2015.

Overall
, India had higher amount/percentage of GDP than that of Bangladesh and Burma in the
given
period. The highest GDP in India was in 2015 as opposed to Bangladesh and Burma in 2005 whereas the least GDP of India and Bangladesh
was counted
in 1985 as compared to Burma in 1990. The GDP of India and Burma fluctuated over the period while Bangladesh increased and remained stable in last fifteen years/
end
of the period.

In terms of 1985, the GDP of India was about 12% as against of Bangladesh and Burma around 6% and 5%
respectively
. India has greater percentage of gross domestic products than that of Bangladesh and Burma in 1990(approximately 14%, 8% and 4%
respectively
). There were GDP growth rates
just
over 15% in India, below 5% in Bangladesh and approximately 6% in Burma in the year of 1995. While the gross domestic products as regards of 2015 In India was
accurately
20%, Bangladesh and Burma had roughly below 15% and almost 8%.

On the other hand
, the difference in GDP among the
given
countries was
very
minimal in the remaining years. Around 15%, 12% and 10% were in India, Bangladesh and Burma
respectively
in case of 2000. In respect of 2005, the counted GDP for all the
given
countries levelled off at 14%. The percentage of GDP in India
was figured
out about 16% that was 2% higher than Bangladesh and Burma in 2010.
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IELTS academic The bar diagram shows a statistics on changes in GDP of three different countries.

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