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The diagram below shows the process of getting a driving licence . Write a report for a university lecturer .

The given process chart depicts the information about the get a driving licence by using different steps. To begin with, in the first step, person visit licence center and than fill the application form. In the next step, people take their eye test in licence center if person pass these test and they pay fee and if person fail they not applicable for licence. Moving further, in the third step, people fail these test afterthat, they regive these written test in a 2 times. In the last step, if a person pay fee and they give written test and take driving test than they acquire licence. Overall, the whole process describe to get the multiple steps. The first step starts with the person visit licence center and in the last step people get licence.
The
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given
process chart depicts the information about the
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get
a driving
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licence
by using
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different
steps.

To
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begin
with, in the
first
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step
,
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person
visit
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licence
center and
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than
fill the application form. In the
next
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step
,
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people
take their eye
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test
in
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licence
center if
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person
pass these
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test and
they pay fee and if
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person
fail
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they not
applicable for
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licence
.

Moving
further
, in the third
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step
,
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people
fail these
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test
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afterthat
, they
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regive
these written
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test
in
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a 2
times. In the last
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step
, if a
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person
pay
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fee and
they give written
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test
and take driving
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test than
they acquire
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licence
.

Overall
, the whole process
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describe
to
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get
the multiple
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steps
. The
first
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step
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starts
with the
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person
visit
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licence
center and in the last
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step
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people
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get
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licence
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process of getting a driving licence. Write a report for a university lecturer.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
134 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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