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The diagram below shows how tomato ketchup is made commercially.

The diagram highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is prepared. There are 15 steps in the process, from harvesting to using it with a hamburger and fries. The first step is that the tomatoes are picked and put in a basket, and then they are separated based on quality, in order to be sent to the factory. After being detached from their stalk and seeds, and peeled their skin, tomatoes are then collected in a container. Once tomatoes have been crushed to a liquid, sugar, vinegar, and salt are then added as a flavoring. The next step is that the liquid is boiled and then left for two hours, in order to be reached a normal temperature. When the tomato ketchup has been made, it is then poured into the bottle, which is labeled. Prior to packing into boxes, the quality of the bottles is checked. Following this, the boxes are loaded onto a truck and then delivered to a supermarket. The last step is that customers buy a bottle of tomato sauce and enjoy with hamburger and fries.

The diagram highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is prepared
. There are 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 in the process, from harvesting to using it with a hamburger and fries.

The first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that the tomatoes are picked
 and put in a basket, and then they are separated
 based on quality, in order to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the factory. After being detached
 from their stalk and seeds, and peeled their skin, tomatoes are then collected in a container. Once tomatoes have been crushed
 to a liquid, sugar, vinegar, and salt are then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 as a flavoring. The next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that the liquid is boiled
 and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for two hours, in order to be reached
 a normal temperature. When the tomato ketchup has been made
, it is then poured into the bottle, which is labeled
. Prior to packing into boxes, the quality of the bottles is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
. Following this, the boxes are loaded
 onto a truck and then delivered to a supermarket. The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that customers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a bottle of tomato sauce and enjoy with hamburger and fries. 