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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. wLWl

The given diagram illustrates information about the process by which instant noodles are produced. Overall, it can be clearly seen that there are 8 stages in this process, commencing with storing flour in silos and ending with labeling and sealing cups. At the first stage of this process, flour is pumped from a truck into tower silos for storage before being put into a mixing machine, where it is mixed with a combination of water and oil. After this, stage has been completed, the resulting mixture is rolled over to create dough sheets, and then going through a machine to be separated into strips. In the fifth stage of the process, these strips are moulded into many noodles discs which are then cooked in oil and left for drying. Following this, these dried noodles discs, together with vegetables and spices are put into cups. Finally, the process ends with these cups being labeled and sealed.

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