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The illustration below shows the proportions of people living in different types of houses in three different areas in 2012 in Denmark. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word.

The illustration below shows the proportions of people living in different types of houses in three different areas in 2012 in Denmark. 08An
The table below depicts the type of houses for three comparisons of areas in Denmark in 2012. Overall, it is clear that the largest proportion of people living in the country went on terrace houses and bungalows. On the other hand, semi-detached houses and detached houses’ steps have the lowest percentages in the table. Out of country, people living at terrace houses were noticeably higher in green park area, at 75% and central area, at nearly 45%. The proportion of living at bungalows were highest in central park area, at 65%. It can be seen that green park area had the lowest percentages of people living for semi-detached houses and  detached houses at nearly 5% and just over 15% respectively. Central area had slightly higher figures for these comparisons, but the lowest figure for detached houses, at only 5%. In central park area, there are same staggering similarities between the number of semi-detached houses and detached houses remained constant a relatively low 5% respectively.
The table below depicts the type of
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for three comparisons of
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in Denmark in 2012.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the largest proportion of
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people
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living
in the country went on terrace
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houses
and bungalows.
On the other hand
, semi-detached
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houses
and
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detached
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houses’
steps have the lowest percentages in the table.

Out of country,
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people
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living
at terrace
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houses
were
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higher in green
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park
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area
, at 75% and
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central
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area
, at
nearly
45%. The proportion of
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living
at bungalows were highest in
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central
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park
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area
, at 65%.

It can be
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seen
that green
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park
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area
had the lowest percentages of
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people
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living
for semi-detached
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houses
and
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 detached
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houses
at
nearly
5% and
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just
over 15%
respectively
.
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Central
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area
had
slightly
higher figures for these comparisons,
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but
the lowest figure for
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detached
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houses
, at
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only
5%.

In
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central
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park
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area
, there are same staggering similarities between the number of semi-detached
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houses
and
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detached
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houses
remained constant a
relatively
low 5%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The illustration below shows the proportions of people living in different types of houses in three different areas in 2012 in Denmark.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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