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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. 7NaX
The diagram gives us information about the process of generating electricity in a hydroelectric power station. overall, as can be seen from the diagram, electricity is generated, firstly, by the action of meeting the river with the dam in high-level reservoir. finally, it arrives to the generator in the power station. at the first stage, during the day, the river comes down from high-level reservoir accident the dam which allow the intake of it. then, the water is flowing to generate electricity till it reaches the reversible turbines, where the generator is operated. after that, it's continuing to low-level reservoir, while the generator in the power station produces electricity to power lines to provide the national grid with it. otherwise, during the night, the water comes from low-level reservoir through reversible turbines, where the water is pumped into high-level reservoir. after that, it goes up by the action of pumping, till it reaches to the dam, which is closed during the night.
The diagram gives us information about the process of generating
electricity
in a hydroelectric
power
station.

overall
, as can be
seen
from the diagram,
electricity
is generated
,
firstly
, by the action of meeting the river with the dam in high-level
reservoir
.
finally
, it arrives to the generator in the
power
station.

at
the
first
stage, during the day, the river
comes
down from high-level
reservoir
accident the dam which
allow
the intake of it. then, the water is flowing to generate
electricity
till it reaches the reversible turbines, where the generator
is operated
.
after
that, it's continuing to low-level
reservoir
, while the generator in the
power
station produces
electricity
to
power
lines to provide the national grid with it.

otherwise
, during the night, the water
comes
from low-level
reservoir
through reversible turbines, where the water
is pumped
into high-level
reservoir
.
after
that, it goes up by the action of pumping, till it reaches to the dam, which
is closed
during the night.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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