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THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW HOW RAINWATER IS COLLECTED FOR THE USE OF DRINKING WATER IN AN AUSTRALIAN TOWN.

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW HOW RAINWATER IS COLLECTED FOR THE USE OF DRINKING WATER IN AN AUSTRALIAN TOWN. paWDa
THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES THE PROCESS OF RAINWATER HARVESTING STORAGE IS USED FOR THE CONSUMPTION OF CONSUMABLE WATER NEEDS. OVERALL, TE PROCESS IS DIVIDED IN THREE MAIN PROCESS, DRAINAGE OF RAIN, FILTERATION AND STORAGE AND CHEMICAL TREATMENT. FROM RAIN TO DRINKING WATER IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, FIRSTLY THE RAIN ON THE TOP HOUSES IS COMES I UNDER GROUND DRAINGAE PIPELINES NEXT, THE WATER FROM DRAINAGE PUMPS TO WATER FILTER WHERE, FILTERATION TOOK PLACE, THEN FILTERED WATER STORED UNDER ENORMOUS CONTAINERS. THE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE STORED WATER SEND TO WATER TREATMENT VESSELS WHERE CHEMICAL ADDED INTO THE WATER. FINALLY, WATER PUMPED TO PIPES TO HOMES FOR COMMON USAGE OF HOUSEHOLD.
THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES THE PROCESS OF RAINWATER HARVESTING STORAGE IS
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USED
FOR THE CONSUMPTION OF CONSUMABLE
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WATER
NEEDS.

OVERALL
, TE PROCESS
IS DIVIDED
IN THREE MAIN PROCESS, DRAINAGE OF RAIN,
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FILTERATION
AND STORAGE AND CHEMICAL TREATMENT. FROM RAIN TO DRINKING
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WATER


IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT,
FIRSTLY
THE RAIN ON THE TOP
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HOUSES
IS
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COMES
I UNDER GROUND
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DRAINGAE
PIPELINES
NEXT
, THE
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WATER
FROM DRAINAGE PUMPS TO
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WATER
FILTER WHERE,
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FILTERATION
TOOK PLACE, THEN FILTERED
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WATER
STORED UNDER ENORMOUS CONTAINERS.

THE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE STORED
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WATER
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SEND
TO
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WATER
TREATMENT VESSELS WHERE CHEMICAL
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ADDED
INTO THE
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WATER
.
FINALLY
,
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WATER
PUMPED TO PIPES TO HOMES FOR COMMON USAGE OF HOUSEHOLD.
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