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the diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

the diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 5EXA

The diagram illustrates the way in which geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Overall, there are 5 stages in this diagram such as Cold water, The injection well, The production well, Condenser, and Generator Turbine used to produce geothermal energy. While the process of producing power plants by Geothermal uses a number of tools in the end of stage. In the first of producing energy, they need to dig soil for 4. 5 km and put the Cold water into the soil. The cold water will be pumped down next to the Injection well. From there, the water flows through the Geothermal zone which is contained by hot rocks and goes to the Production well. Following that, the water is produced because of the hot rocks and will go up to the Condenser. Then, the water will condense and flow through to the Generator Turbine. In the last stage, the water enters the steam and the turbine will spin the water. At this point, the electricity that has been produced can be distributed to the power pole.

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Cold
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water
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 to the Injection well. From there, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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water
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