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The diagram below illustrates how to produce several from pomelos

The diagram below illustrates how to produce several from pomelos 73dPY

The illustration predicts various method to manufacture pomelos. What stands out of a glance is five different products from fresh pomelos with each path of the pomelos such as peel, seed and juice. In general, these products are either sold in supermarket and making perfume, while the peels can also be used for making shampoo. In first section, fresh pomelos are collected by the farmer to the storage for three weeks. Then, in the Extraction step, peel, seed and juice from pomelos are separated for diverse demand and function. Beginning with the squeezer, peel can be used as food for animal. Furthermore, dried pomelos ‘s peel is also consumed like shampoo products. Seeds from the extraction will be collected for the later used. Subsequent, the pomelos juice after removed peel and seeds will be undergo the refrigeration in storage for three days to produce perfume while the origin juice will be packaged and delivered direct to the supermarket.

The illustration predicts various method to manufacture Possible spelling mistake found.pommelsromeosPomeroy
pomelos
.

What stands out of a glance is five This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 products from fresh Possible spelling mistake found.pommelsromeosPomeroy
pomelos
 with each path of the Possible spelling mistake found.pommelsromeosPomeroy
pomelos
 such as peel, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seed
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
. In general
, these products are either sold in supermarket and making perfume, while the peels can also
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for making shampoo.

In first
 section, fresh Possible spelling mistake found.pommelsromeosPomeroy
pomelos
are collected
 by the farmer to the storage for three weeks. Then, in the Extraction step, peel, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seed
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 from Possible spelling mistake found.pommelsromeosPomeroy
pomelos
are separated
 for diverse demand and function. Beginning with the squeezer, peel can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as food for animal. Furthermore
, dried Did you mean "pomelo‘s" or "pomelos‘"?pomelo‘spomelos‘
pomelos ‘s
 peel is also
 consumed like shampoo products. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
Seeds
 from the extraction will be collected
 for the Did you mean "latter" (=the second of two items)?latter
later
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
.

Subsequent, the Possible spelling mistake found.pommelsromeosPomeroy
pomelos
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 after removed peel and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seeds
 will be Consider using the past participle "undergone"?undergone
undergo
 the refrigeration in storage for three days to produce perfume while the origin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 will be packaged
 and delivered direct to the supermarket. 