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The diagram below describes the beloved take always which carry food to humans and the statistics of Indian inns in the UK between 1960 and 2015.

The diagram below describes the beloved take always which carry food to humans and the statistics of Indian inns in the UK between 1960 and 2015. Nm3Dd
Essay. The diagram below describes the beloved take always which carry food to humans and the statistics of Indian inns in the UK between 1960 and 2015. According to the given maps there were less than a fifth changes between 1960 and 2015. We can see from the first diagram demonstrate that mora than third habits have eaten meal at inn in the Chinese is a great deal less than Indian. Due to the fact that Chinese inhabitants have eaten sea animals. Especially, sea animals were prepared at hotel. Therefore, Chinese nation have eaten meals at restaurant. On the other hand, another country has decreased year by year. Such as, Italians, Thai, Greek and Mexicans. These countries have not developed like Italians and Chinese. It can be seen second diagram show inns were go up day by day. The number of countries have not reached their independent between 1960 and 1980. After that, UK were independent and that was built numerous inns. That is why, inns were rose year by year. For instance, in 1997 in UK have got 8000 restaurants. After that, in 2015 in UK restaurants grew up 10. 000. this motion was sign of UK was developing. From the diagram, it can be shown the diagram below describe the fantastic takeaways of habits in UK and the statistics of Indian inn in the UK between 1960 and 2015.
Essay.

The diagram below
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describes
the beloved take always which carry food to humans and the statistics of Indian
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inns
in the UK between 1960 and 2015. According to the
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given
maps there were less than a fifth
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changes
between 1960 and 2015.

We can
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see
from the
first
diagram demonstrate that
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mora
than third habits have eaten meal at
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inn
in the Chinese is a great deal less than Indian. Due to the fact that Chinese inhabitants have eaten sea animals.
Especially
, sea animals
were prepared
at hotel.
Therefore
, Chinese nation have eaten meals at restaurant.
On the other hand
, another country has decreased
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year
by
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year
. Such as, Italians, Thai, Greek and Mexicans. These countries have not developed like Italians and Chinese.

It can be
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seen
second diagram
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show
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inns
were
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go
up day by day. The number of countries
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have
not reached their independent between 1960 and 1980. After that, UK were independent and that
was built
numerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inns
.
That is
why,
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inns
were rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
.
For instance
, in 1997 in UK have
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got
8000 restaurants. After that, in 2015 in UK restaurants grew up 10. 000. this motion was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
of UK was developing.

From the diagram, it can
be shown
the diagram below
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describe
the fantastic takeaways of habits in UK and the statistics of Indian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inn
in the UK between 1960 and 2015.
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IELTS academic The diagram below describes the beloved take always which carry food to humans and the statistics of Indian inns in the UK between 1960 and 2015.

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