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The maps show the developments that the university sport centre over different period between present and future. Overall, a closer look at the maps highlight the fact that the biggest change will the disappearance of the outdoor courts. Meanwhile, the swimming pool and changing room will be remained untouched. Looking at the maps in the more detail, a lot of modifications can be observed. Firstly, the most striking alteration is that the sport centre will be developed. While the outdoor court in the left of map will be destroyed and replaced by leisure pool, the sports hall and two dance studio will be contructed on the original site of the outdoor court in the hand side. In the middle of university, the 25m pool, changing room and seating will be remained unchanged. Besides, the gym will be expanded to the east. the changing room will be erected with the sport shop and cafe in the two hand corners of south.
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the developments that the university
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centre
over
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period between present and future.

Overall
, a closer look at the
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maps
highlight the fact that the biggest
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change
will the disappearance of the outdoor courts. Meanwhile, the swimming pool and changing room will
be remained
untouched.

Looking at the
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maps
in the more detail,
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a lot of
modifications can
be observed
.
Firstly
, the most striking alteration is that the
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sport
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centre
will
be developed
. While the outdoor court in the
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left
of
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map
will be
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destroyed
and replaced by leisure pool, the
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sports
hall and two dance
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studio
will be
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contructed
on the original site of the outdoor court in the hand side.

In the middle of university, the
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25m
pool, changing room and seating will
be remained
unchanged.
Besides
, the gym will
be expanded
to the east.
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the
changing room will
be erected
with the
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shop and
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cafe
in the two hand corners of south.
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IELTS academic the developments that the university sport centre over different period between present and future.

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