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The bar chart shows the quantity of CO2 emissions from four different modes of transportation: cars, buses, vans, and trucks between 2000 and 2020.

The bar chart shows the quantity of CO2 emissions from four different modes of transportation: cars, buses, vans, and trucks between 2000 and 2020. 2a8pk
The bar chart shows the quantity of CO2 emissions from four different modes of transportation: cars, buses, vans, and trucks between 2000 and 2020. The line graph gives the information about the number of vehicles in England and Wales over the same period. Overall, the number of vehicles was increase dramatically while CO2 emissions were climb a significantly from 2000 to 2020. To begin, in the year 2000, England and Wales had about 20, 00, 000 cars. In the following ten years, the overall number increased slightly to 35 millions, and it was continue to rise rapidly, reaching around 60 millions in 2020. Four major sources of CO2 emissions are depicted in the column graph. From 2000 to 2010. cars emitted the most CO2, and this trend was continue, with 26 tons of CO2 emitted by 2020. Trucks, surprisingly, followed the same path as cars and forecasted a similar pattern, but the overall amount was substantially lower, rising from 15 tonnes in 2000 to 23 tons in 2020. Bus and van CO2 emissions were expected to r
The bar chart
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shows
the quantity of CO2
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emissions
from four
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different
modes of transportation:
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cars
, buses, vans, and trucks between 2000 and 2020. The line graph gives the information about the number of vehicles in England and Wales over the same period.

Overall
, the number of vehicles was increase
dramatically
while CO2
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emissions
were
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climb
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significantly
from 2000 to 2020.

To
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begin
, in the year 2000, England and Wales had about 20, 00, 000
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cars
. In the following ten years, the
overall
number increased
slightly
to 35 millions, and it was
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continue
to rise
rapidly
, reaching around 60 millions in 2020.

Four major sources of CO2
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emissions
are depicted
in the column graph. From 2000 to 2010.
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cars
emitted the most CO2, and this trend was continue, with 26 tons of CO2 emitted by 2020. Trucks,
surprisingly
, followed the same path as
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cars
and forecasted a similar pattern,
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but
the
overall
amount was
substantially
lower, rising from 15 tonnes in 2000 to 23 tons in 2020. Bus and van CO2
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emissions
were
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expected
to
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the quantity of CO2 emissions from four different modes of transportation: cars, buses, vans, and trucks between 2000 and 2020.

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