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The chart below show the percentage of water is used in Six areas of the world

The chart below show the percentage of water is used in Six areas of the world MoOMk
The pie chart indicates that how water is been used in Six different areas of the world. Water is used for domestic, industrial and agricultural purpose in North america, South america, Europe, Africa, Central asia and South east asia. In North america 48% of water is used for industry and 39 % of water is used for agriculture and 13% of water is used for domestic purpose. They are making use of water 71% for agriculture and 10 % for industry and 19% for domestic use in South america and in Europe 53% of water is used for industrial purpose 32% for agricultural use and 12% for domestic purpose. Even though, In Africa 84% of water for agriculture and 7% is used to industry and 9% is used for domestic purpose. While In central Asia and South east asia 88% and 81% is used for agriculture and 5% and 12 % for industry and 7% for domestic in both areas. According to the pie chart central asia has utilised 88% of water for agriculture compare to other areas. Europe has least use of water for agriculture that is about 32%. South america has utilised 17% of water for domestic purpose than other areas and two areas are having least use of water for domestic that is just 7%. 53% of water is utilised for industry in Europe than other areas and 5% of water is least used in central asia.
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