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How orange juice is produced

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The diagram shows how orange juice is produced. Overall, it is obvious that producing orange juice starts with picking fresh oranges. In the end, orange juices are delivered to supermarket. What seems from the diagram, the orange juice is produced in two ways, directly from fresh juice and evaporation. No matter how it is produced, picking oranges is first thing to do. After this process, oranges go to factory for being washed. Next step is extraction, and there are two results which are fresh juice and solid waste. Solid waste go to animal feed, while fresh juice is packaged and sent to supermarket. The second way requires much work than first simple way. Refrigerated truck receives the fresh juice and takes to evaporation in order to remove water from it. The following steps are concentrating the juice and canning it. Canned juices is taken to the warehouse and factory, for adding water, respectively. Last steps are packaging the product and sending to supermarket.
The diagram
shows
how orange
juice
is produced
.
Overall
, it is obvious that producing orange
juice
starts
with picking
fresh
oranges. In the
end
, orange
juices
are delivered
to supermarket. What seems from the diagram, the orange
juice
is produced
in two ways,
directly
from
fresh
juice
and evaporation. No matter how it
is produced
, picking oranges is
first
thing to do. After this process, oranges go to factory for
being washed
.
Next
step is extraction, and there are two results which are
fresh
juice
and solid waste. Solid waste go to animal feed, while
fresh
juice
is packaged
and
sent
to supermarket. The second way requires much work than
first
simple way. Refrigerated truck receives the
fresh
juice
and takes to evaporation in order to remove water from it. The following steps are concentrating the
juice
and canning it. Canned
juices
is taken
to the warehouse and factory, for adding water,
respectively
. Last steps are packaging the product and sending to supermarket.
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IELTS academic How orange juice is produced

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163 words
6.5
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