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The bar chart displays the end of year value for four major international money market indices such as the UK Market Index, the US Market Index, the Korean Market Index, and French Market Index from 2005 to 2008. The bar chart illustrates in the year 2005 Dow Jones has the highest index value of 10800 and KOSPI has the lowest value of 1200, FTSE100 and CAC40 has an index value of 5900 and 4700. There were no major changes in the index value of FTTSE100 and CAC 40 and Dow Jones crossed over 12000 in the years 2006 and 2007. In the year 2008, All markets index values were decreased as FTSE100, Dow Jones, KOSPI, and CAC40 had 42000, 8800, 1000, and 3000 index values. Overall, The market index values have many changes during these years but in the last year, they decreased to the lowest. The market index value has increased for three years later than it decreased to the half of earlier.
The bar chart displays the
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for four major international money
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indices such as the UK
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, the US
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, the Korean
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, and French
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from 2005 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates in the
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2005 Dow Jones has the highest
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index
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value
of 10800 and
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KOSPI
has the lowest
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of 1200, FTSE100 and CAC40 has an
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index
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of 5900 and 4700. There were no major
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changes
in the
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of FTTSE100 and CAC 40 and Dow Jones crossed over 12000 in the years 2006 and 2007.

In the
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2008, All markets
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values
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as FTSE100, Dow Jones,
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KOSPI
, and CAC40 had 42000, 8800, 1000, and 3000
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values.

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values have
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during these years
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in the last
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, they decreased to the lowest. The
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has increased for three years later than it decreased to the half of earlier.
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IELTS academic the chat shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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