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the chat shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices.

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The bar chart displays the end of year value for four major international money market indices such as the UK Market Index, the US Market Index, the Korean Market Index, and French Market Index from 2005 to 2008. The bar chart illustrates in the year 2005 Dow Jones has the highest index value of 10800 and KOSPI has the lowest value of 1200, FTSE100 and CAC40 has an index value of 5900 and 4700. There were no major changes in the index value of FTTSE100 and CAC 40 and Dow Jones crossed over 12000 in the years 2006 and 2007. In the year 2008, All markets index values were decreased as FTSE100, Dow Jones, KOSPI, and CAC40 had 42000, 8800, 1000, and 3000 index values. Overall, The market index values have many changes during these years but in the last year, they decreased to the lowest. The market index value has increased for three years later than it decreased to the half of earlier.
The bar chart displays the
end
of
year
value
for four major international money
market
indices such as the UK
Market
Index
, the US
Market
Index
, the Korean
Market
Index
, and French
Market
Index
from 2005 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates in the
year
2005 Dow Jones has the highest
index
value
of 10800 and
KOSPI
has the lowest
value
of 1200, FTSE100 and CAC40 has an
index
value
of 5900 and 4700. There were no major
changes
in the
index
value
of FTTSE100 and CAC 40 and Dow Jones crossed over 12000 in the years 2006 and 2007.

In the
year
2008, All markets
index
values
were decreased
as FTSE100, Dow Jones,
KOSPI
, and CAC40 had 42000, 8800, 1000, and 3000
index
values.

Overall
, The
market
index
values have
many
changes
during these years
but
in the last
year
, they decreased to the lowest. The
market
index
value
has increased for three years later than it decreased to the half of earlier.
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IELTS academic the chat shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices.

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  American English
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164 words
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